I am writing a romantasy novel and I’m starting out with a love interest who was a previous ex. In the end, he will betray her, however I need some character flaws that leaves characters feeling uneasy about him. Any tips?

Last Updated: 02.07.2025 11:54

I am writing a romantasy novel and I’m starting out with a love interest who was a previous ex. In the end, he will betray her, however I need some character flaws that leaves characters feeling uneasy about him. Any tips?

He's always the last one to leave a party

He is always late

He forgets his wallet

Why do I get stressed when I go to bed?

He doesn't like her cat

He's never available on Saturdays

He always cracks his knuckles.

Do people of NYC drive around Central Park all the time? Is there any subway tunnel to cross the park quickly? Is it annoying for people and does it cause traffic?

He's always helping his ex